All Comments on 'Hell's Gate Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

To be a traitor against the demon world, not a good thing to be if your plan goes ass end up. And what will the angels do when they find out about Michael? There'll be some smiting going on.

cittrancittranalmost 11 years ago
This is surprisingly good

I say 'surprisingly', because I'm perpetually on the lookout for good nonhuman & scifi/fantasy stories, and I tend to catch them within the first chapter or two.

You got all the way to 4 before I found it.

I'm hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Growing bored of this story...

very quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good

It's amazing! I'm hooked! The problem with this category is no one finishes amazing stories!

fefe428fefe428over 10 years ago
Hope there will be more...

I just re-read this story, and I really hope that it gets finished. It has so much potential!!!

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