All Comments on 'Hell's Gate Ch. 05'

I was going through my favorites list to delete dead story lines, and there you were. Good timing. Great story. Welcome back.

P.S. I understand the long wait. I've have writers block for a while and have just started writing a new story. It's tough when you want to write and have no time, no ambition, and no ideas. :-(

You my good Author have been favorited. Really excited for the sequel

LOVE IT! This chapter was absolutely brilliant. Please don't make us wait long for the next one. Can't wait for the sequel, but PLEASE finish this story first. There's nothing worse than other stories being started, when others have not been finished. And believe me, there is plenty of them out there on Lit. SO ANNOYING!

I'm glad you continued the story can't wait for the sequel

So happy you continued this story!! Really good chapter, I hope MIchael is not dead, and both him and Gabriel be free in the chapters to come!!

kisses and love!

Very nicely done...except for the cliffhanger haha Still very good story!! Keep writing! You have a knack for it!!