All Comments on 'Helmand's Secret'

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chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Good First Story***

Started out great but slowed down towards the end. Looking forward to future submissions from you. Thanks for sharing.

BrandybeebeeBrandybeebeeover 8 years ago
Well Done

Congratulations on your first story. It was hot and exciting and I was enthralled. I hope you write many more. 5 * & favourited.

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