All Comments on 'Help is at Hand Ch. 02'

by CronustheTitan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Cheating husband and slut wives!

Wonderful story you have here-NOT! What about the spouses that are getting cheated on, deceived, and lied too. Sucks to be married to a cheater!

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
Now you're deep in....

.....teenage angst.Go away. Far away.

PEDROMASSURE56PEDROMASSURE56about 14 years ago
Great Story can't wait for part II

Well written, as regards the previous comments, this an an erotic stories site, no -one forces anyone to read the stories. The guy can obviously give the ladies what they are not getting at home. Pete from Derby UK

jbtosb04jbtosb04about 14 years ago
Great story!

Please continue story-line. Can't wait to see how Ron handles the entire neighborhood.....Sometime difficult to read, the he's and her's keep getting mixed up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
You are bad....

You did not get an editor and Roy popped into the picture again. Is he Ron's twin brother?

C_frommnC_frommnabout 14 years ago
Another Great

Story I love the way you get everything in Line so everyone knows whats Coming Up:)

SirenSeekerSirenSeekerabout 14 years ago
Great Story

Do continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very Hot, But

Your story is very hot, but Ron still has to pay a price for trying to knock up all of these women.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Proofreading

Its a word. And an action. Do it.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
Unrealistic

Otherwise a good story.

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
Aerobics Club

When do you think you will be able to get around to Bringing the Aerobics Club together. and where will the Girls Meet Ron and how will they keep their Pussies tight for their hubbys. Great Story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Aerobics Class

Id love to read the next segment. It's been a while, anything in the works?

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 11 years ago
Aerobics Club

Now i think all of the above mentioned Ladies would love for an Aerobics session once a week in each others house with hubby going Golfing or watching Sports at another house would be a Grand Idea... and I would think at least a 50/50 split on willing Pregnancies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
??

You need to learn how to section and organise paragraphs, this story was confusing as hell to which part was where.

Your spelling is dogshit too, insofar the bits where you can't tell the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE

C_frommnC_frommnover 7 years ago
So!

When will thee Aerobics Classes begin and who will be in the Club. He will need to cut down on the Hicky's or the End will be near.

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