All Comments on 'Help Me, Sister Ch. 02'

by FaeLissa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awsome!!

I love this story from start to finish and i hope you will make more. :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This was different.

The story so far is so much different than any other, in a good way. The focus on Ash's strangeness is rare and I think it works great along with their feelings.

I think the dominant/submissive relationship and the parent/child subtext put Mail especially in a complicated position, but that just helps make the story more unique.

Great work and please go on!

TestSubject001TestSubject001over 10 years ago
A very unique story ....

and I am totally digging it. Keep up the good work and don't get to crazy and to far off your original plot points that you are building now. As long as no hardcore bondage (totally up to you if you want to) gets thrown in, I am in this story for the long run.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please follow up

Totally different an awesome. Love the foot fetish interesting quirk. I would love to see theses two developed more keep up the excellent work

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