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Judging by the types and quantity of errors, I'm guessing 6th or 7th grade, out for the summer?

As a fellow anon I apologize on behalf of our collective retardation. I can only guess he or she has such a hard time making friends that lashing out here is their only leisure in life.

More, please.

Appreciate the kind words, bud. Never claimed to be any good at this so really all of my works should just be taken as practise for the sake of fun and gradual improvement. If only that first fellow had taken the time to give criticism instead of just insults. Aw well.

Enjoyed this story, as far as it went.

This was released 7 years ago. Why isn't there more???