All Comments on 'Helpful Policeman'

Your heart is in the right place, but without an editor - and a bit of a plot - this story is unreadable.

but I'll never know. It was so poorly written, I gave up. There are at least a dozen distracting poor word choices. I agree with the previous commentor: Don't quit your day job because this effort totally sucks.

Successful writers all have one thing in common, and that is a "good idea". You have very good ideas. They are common problems that we all face in sex and relationships but still, the premise for your stories is interesting. Having said that, don't completely dismiss the suggestions to edit your stories. Spelling "hear" with the letters "here" is the least of the issue. It is about "run-on" sentences which make the flow of the story difficult to follow. If someone can't edit for you, can you use Microsoft Word with the latest edition? They correct a lot of things, including sentence fragments and run-on sentences. I'm telling you this because you possess what many failed writers don't. Like I said before, you have very good ideas. For that reason alone, don't quit! Good luck

This story seems fairley unlikeley really. Still it was quite hot.

I just had me a cop fucking fantasy

Thanks. Great story.