All Comments on 'Helping Hand'

Concerning my slime suggestion i have done some thoughts and research.

Either a slime harem sort of thing or

A reunion style story involving a man betrayed by the order, for some reason. He is then saved by a dark slime, who is actually a former childhood love and friend, as well as the reason he had joined the order. It can be extended/changed from there, but i liked the shoggoth story and would like more involving slimes.

Another possibility would something similar to the shoggoth story or something involving a nureonago or even both, possibly having a competition to prove who is the best maid/servant

I will try to incorporate your suggestion, anon. The plot is very good indeed. The trouble is that slimes are not exactly my favourite monsters to write about or even read, but I should be able to overcome that.

And you told you're no good at comedy?

I have literally laughed myself off the chair reading the first part :)

It'd be great to read more stories like this.

In that case, friend, I'm jumping for joy because our senses of humour match. XD However, AFAIK, most people who do read me keep asking for my sex scenes more than my sense of humour.

in a bar twins minotaur sisters are fighting only someone soft and tender like the owner can break them up only to be broken in that night.

I've got it saved in my to-do list, but there isn't too much to work with here. It can still become a good short.

Might rework the start a little. Matched way too many spots on the incel/"nice guy" bingo card, maybe drop the following the swordswoman and just have him see her meet the asshole on a corner and hear a version of the conversation.

After he sees the hellhound and a bit before that is great though. Depressed lonely dude protected from 4 bitches by the world's hottest hellhound.

-V

Those are very good suggestions. I've been working now very long hours and haven't written anything for six months now. It's unfortunately a little hard for me to write now but I'll be doing my best.