All Comments on 'Helping Hand'

by aloni1108

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gentilitygentilityalmost 16 years ago
wow

I can't believe how easily this story progressed from meeting to great sex in probably 10 or 15 minutes! Believable and a real turn-on.

darkindaydarkindayalmost 16 years ago
Hmm

Although, the story was well written, the one thing that stood out in my mind is the fact that the door was wide open. It was even mentioned in the dialog. What would have been perfect, or possibly a continuation of the story, would be if the roommate were to be watching, or came home and joined in on the fun. Yummo.

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