All Comments on 'Helping Hands - Billy's Story'

But if you need someone else in your marriage you have problems that won't go away.

This is a well written story, and the story line is very believable. When two people have lived together for a very long time, I can understand how the sex would diminish.What you have written is that Billy has been given the opportunity to rejuvenate their marriage with the help of Teresa. I hope that you write the next chapter where Teresa and John visit Billy and her husband Thanks for the great story........Rich

having found out a long time ago what happened between Billy and Teresa, he figured from the beginning that he caught her somewhat on the rebound. Since she has only shown little interest in him for many years and with her eagerness to spend so much time with Teresa, Charles had been preparing for the end of their marriage. He had found himself a cute girlfriend with whom he spent almost as much time as with Billy. His new girlfriend who had gone through a nasty divorce appreciated the plain sex and did not crave variety. So when Billy confessed, he was glad it turned out that way and arranged for taping their conversations about her cheating. When Teresa and John came to visit, he excused himself from their sexplay but set out to film them. The following week she was serviced with divorce papers..... That's one way Charles's story could go, there are of course other possibilities but I'm curious to see what Pandsal has written. G.Belgium

This was a well-written and hot story. I do hope you write a sequel. One thing I would suggest is that each line of dialog (even if it's only a few words) should be a separate paragraph. This improves the flow of the story and makes it easier for the reader. Still, this omission never really detracted from a very good story. Keep writing, please!

Sad story, I guess in U.K. husbands response is to be expected. Not many men would act this way.

More lovely writing guys!

Like all your stories, the two 'Helping Hands' leave me with a big smile and a warm glow.

- Gill.

As an octogenerian I'm appreciative of stories that indicate there's still life in John Thomas. And the ladies I know in their 60's and 70's like it too.

Please, Sir, more, as Oliver Twist was wont to say.

Wonderfully well written by a most gifted writer. Held my complete attention throughout. I love the way your descriptions of characters leaves room for my envisioning past lovers both real and imagined. All this made me feel a real part of the story. Thanks

Antinony