All Comments on 'Helping Her Make a Demo Tape'

I was sure you were going to include wifey in one of those scenes....maybe being eaten by her friend, maybe eating your cum out of Melanie/Ginger, maybe fucking Melanie with a strap on OR maybe riding Melanie's face while you, who are fucking Melanie, neck and grope her...... and wouldn't it be a surprise if the producers wanted ALL THREE of them?? .... LOL Chapter 2???

More please!!! That was awesome!

by not having a sister.

Looking forward to more.

One minor note on details -

"Moving to the camera, she took a deep breath, and pressed Play"

Shouldn't that have been pressed RECORD.

...Now, you need to enhance it with a second 'chapter'... the possibilities are almost endless: does Lauren get turned on enough to join in; what about his sister also finding out about the results of the encounter... Does Melanie "land" a job..??

You could play with this for hours... Good effort...SR

Loved it, man ... story was very original. That was one lucky guy. I'd like to see you continue it, and like most every one else, get wifey involved. Hell, maybe he gets a career in porn. Keep up the good work.

More, want to read more. Got me so turned on, I am ready to do a demo.

You forgot your own story as you had hubby call her "Melanie," instead of "Ginger." Please watch for these details in your future stories as you show promise of writing worthwhile ones.

It would have been good to have the wife join in. I was hoping for that anyway!

Fabulous. (They BOTH get hired lol)