All Comments on 'Helping Mrs. West'

by geronimo_appleby

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amoroneamoronealmost 8 years ago
Superb

Well written and great use of the English language. I loved it and found it so erotic, every young man's dream come true.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 8 years ago
Yummy!

Very well done! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
A JODI WEST makeover......

..........and you're a fan, right GA?

Understood. Lady sure is hot so I get the inspiration.

Deja Vu aside, nice effort. Tnx.

Paxo1944Paxo1944almost 8 years ago
In Praise of Older Women

This brings back so many memories of my time with my girlfriends mother back in the early 60's.

Great story, looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

Beautifully done! I love the care that she shows to him. 5 stars from me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Where are you Mrs West

What a lovely story. I think you need to write more - let me know when you do the next one. There sre huge possibilities and im sure Mrs West ana Allen will get excited and share their dirty fucking secrets with you. Go for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Dear GA good story again. Thought it strange June West hadn't offered her Christen name to Alan in the most intimate of relationships.

Looking forward to when Alan pops to the street near by, could take a mate with him.

Keep writing.

REgards

Greyman01Greyman01over 5 years ago
Terrific

Great concept of a mature woman teaching a virgin ‘stud’. Well written with some nice turns of a phrase dropped in like little treats.

Nicely down.

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 5 years ago
Geronimo!!!

You've done it again I love your wicked humour, you bad lad, don't give up yet your tales are way to much fun. On another level my favourite is and will always be A CAMBRIDGE SUMMER, a lovely tale. As someone else once said "you are the greatest".

amoroneamoroneover 2 years ago

Absolutely first class, BRILLIANT.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Well that was a fast one all the way through such good descriptions the only thing wrong was if it was his first time he would have cum much sooner for several times before getting to understand what was on offer and taking a bit more time to enjoy

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