All Comments on 'Helping My Sister'

How HOT was that !! It seems his 19 yr old sister got hot too. Maybe there is some hope that they will take things further ??

Maybe, he has a big cock to match her big boobs ?? Thanks !!

No, wait a minute, what I really meant to say was, that was complete and utter shitty garbage. Go away and quit wasting space on this site.

I just agree

I am the one who posted the first comment. Those two other comments ain't mine.

Your English sucks and the story is lame. It had great potential, but you blew it. Find another hobby.

I liked that the sister changed her clothes right in front of her brother. Please take the negative comments with a grain of salt. This site is plenty big enough that there is room for writers with all different English accents. That is part of the charm---encountering the thoughts of writers from other regions and traditions,

The story is conventional. The use of English suggests that it's not your native language. However, I applaud that you took a chance, wrote something and posted it here. Do it again. In the next story, you might have the sister come back for more. She loves the cock and can't keep herself away. Maybe she fucks or sucks. Maybe our hero gets his face where the thong was. Carry on. Your skills will get better.

Probably the worst story I've #EVER Read on LITEROTICA & quite possibly the worst story ever published on this Site

Read the 1st paragraph(knew i shouldn't have read the rest) 18 Year Old Man live with Parents & 19 year old sister.Parents out my #LITTLE sister at friends #Dude shes older than you can't call her little sister,Unless you were talking height weight etc but never said that

And really sis comes to room with her Computer catches him wanking!He gets dressed while she waits they go to her room which only has one chair in it,mustn't have bed(she must sleep i chair or the floor)Because she gets tired & sits on his lap

Granted the story could've been better and used better English, but it's certainly not the worst story I've read on here, keep writing dude you can only get better :)

Story sucked!!!!!! The end!!!7x16

I'd suggest working on your English, not trying to be mean, but I assume it isn't your first language. The lack of colorful vocabulary is what makes it kind of a bore to read, and doesn't flow like it could. Otherwise the idea behind the story seems fine.

One star for trying. Minus 4 *'s because it sucked. You need to start giving your English teacher some head!

I liked your story, even though the writing leaves a lot to be desired. Work on your writing and then keep writing, one day you might revisit this and make it better.

My sister caught me jacking off to her panties and laughed at me, but said i needed to be taught not to sniff others panties without permission. she grabbed my a pulled my over her knee, spanked my so hard, my hard penis rubbed against her legs eventually i exploded all over her knee, which she actually didn't mind, she just made me lick it off of her. than she asked me if i liked her panties and told me to ask her to see the ones she was wearing. I got to unbutton her jeans, pull them down and sniff her panties while she was wearing them, my dick was hard agin and she let me jerk off again and i cummed so hard again all over her feet. of course i had to clean them off with my tongue. best day ever... literally just happen yesterday... she said i could ask permission, but if she caught me doing it without asking, i would get a harder spanking. she gets off work soon and will be home in about 25 minutes, gonna go get caught again...

This was probably your first story, You got 5 stars from me for this. As for the story, when you rewrite it and correct your grammar i would probably give you a 4 or 5 stars. Until then. Good work.. you got it in you...PS i love short stories....

Al

It was kind of a boring read! 3 stars!

No imagination