All Comments on 'Helpless and Taking It'

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William smyth almost 12 years ago

Short and sweet and very hot

A five star description of hot encounter.

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

"...between my boyfriend and me earlier this week. I bucked so hard I pulled a muscle in my back. :) "

...that comment made me cum for the FIRST time.

...voted 5 stars.

Anonymousalmost 12 years ago

For Trouble

Danger here...

Well, I have to say that you did a nice job of putting into a first person pov. The only problem for me was that I'm not a woman so I could not get into it as much as I would like to. Also, I feel that you did an excellent job of using varied descriptors to really bring out the story. All in all I think that if this is a humble beginning that you have a good future in writing a head of you.

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