by Explorer222
I think both women need to get good hard spankings. Susan loves to be spanked and Judy needs a man to show her that some men should always be the boss.
Methinks Judy needs a lesson in trust. Domination games are very good for teaching trust.
I believe Judy and Susan could start and all end up together with Judy opening up once again to men.
In the real life this will lead you to 10 days of hell. Rushing to sex, no build up and shallow knowlege of lesbians. It started good ended up as cheesy story.
Okay, so I find this like, super coincidental. I used to know this guy, (he's 18 now but I haven't been able to talk to him for a few months) his name is Matt, he used to live in New York (now lives in FL), knows how to shoot a bow, has brown hair and amazing blue eyes, and enjoys BDSM. This was a great story btw.
Good story
Let's have Judy spank Susan in the morning because of her O with you and then Segway into a threesome
Keep writing.
But, oh my what a dickhead. It was far too rushed, still it’s a done deal now because obviously you wrote more. What REALLY made me laugh was the tags, “hero” more like user, it’s similar to hero in that two of the letters are the same.
Tess (UK)