All Comments on 'Henry's Exposed Adventure Ch. 01'

Not too much and not too little.

Sophisticated in how it's spot on for the kind of story it is and a good job on set-up and keeping running tension.

Thank you.

Hope there are more adventures.

I'm sure this is going some where....

Cute, but much too much "foreplay" that did nothing to advance the story. Three, perhaps four, opening paragraphs to set the scene would have been sufficient.

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