All Comments on 'Henry's Mom'

Can't wait to see what happens the next day. Hot story.

The story could benefit from a good editing and/or proof reading to fix things. Take "saw the plenty", saw what or could have use saw it. As posted the reader is confused. So the story wasn't ready for posting just some kind of very rough starting draft.

Your descriptions are so realistic that I can imagine that I as there in person. Wonderful story, can't wait for chapter 2.

A sweet, loving story that I really enjoyed. Glad to read that Becky was Henry's first (and hopefully last!)

as Henry's is in this excellent story. The kid's been feeling the burden of his unwanted virginity while away at school. Meanwhile, his mother Becky's been experiencing the "empty nest" syndrome, and a "huge void" in her life. More likely the void's the one between her legs and what feels so empty is her motherly cunt. But see how easily family problems get sorted out when the members involved are open-minded and just turn their backs on stupid, outmoded restrictions. Becky spreads her legs for her darling baby boy, Henry sticks his hard young cock up the warm wet ever-loving cunt he came out of, and, voila, Henry ain't no virgin anymore, and Becky's void is filled to the brim with lots of creamy semen from baby boy's hot young balls. They've discovered the truth of the old saying, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other."

For the most part it was pretty good. It does need more attention to editing and I thought on page one she took his cock in her mouth and tasted his precum. But on page 2 she talks about it being her first time.

Imho you should write from their perspective not a 3rd party. Would have been more realistic. Keep writing.

its the ultimate way to show your son how much you love him and the best way for your son to show he loves you is to have his baby and make him a daddy ;-)

Forbidden or not the gene is out of the bottle. mom and son will become addicted to the glorious feeling of hot incest sex. Her son will be consumed with the desire to burry his hard cock into his mother and hump away until he reaches the orgasmic release he craves. As for mommy spreading her thighs to receive her sons undivided attention and love will be to much for her to turn him away. With her son bathing her womb in his seed it is only a matter of time before mommy's belly swells and she gives birth to her own grandchild.

When people read stories they "go to the movies" in their mind. In this case the movie was, at best, a grade B flick. The premise was good but it came across as a scenario that wouldn't happen in real life. Maybe if it wasn't presented as a narrative. Keep at it. You show promise.

This is true Mother love for her son, and you nailed it. Remember mother/son sex is the best incest...................... Thanks for a Great Read

According to the story this was his first time.

It was for me too. In all these many years I've never heard (read?) a woman's genitals described as. "the nexus of her gender" what's next the nadir of her nipple?