All Comments on 'Her'

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vampiress_leanna27vampiress_leanna27over 7 years ago
Good beginning

What's happens next? Looking forward to finding out

gasbrowngasbrownover 7 years ago
good start

please continue! i like what you have started.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
A yummy start!

I hope that this continues! Thank you!

1994lesbian1994lesbianover 7 years ago
😀

Lovely story. Hope to see a second part 😀

WindySwimmingWindySwimmingover 7 years ago
Great!

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Rambling Narrative, But....

Yeah, ...but, ...it gets a 5-star rating from me!

Rambling, wandering thoughts, first-person story ...almost all the things I don't like, yet this one, this author, this writer pulled it off with style and with erotic emotions. I'm impressed.

If I get my way, this story will continue. And please, if you're tempted to change the writing style, please don't. I don't know how you do it, but it's an impressive method of writing (or else you're just good at it and no one else is?).

Keep up the great work,

gjames17gjames17over 7 years ago
Yes!!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

By all means, keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I love it

Please keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Need More of this

That is so well written and erotic. Keep up the good work.

gnome_mangnome_manover 7 years ago
Bad Girrrll, Bad Girrrlllll

Shame, shame on you for leaving me all up in the air like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please write more

This is just getting good please finish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
finish

Finish this is so good

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Finish this. Sooooo good

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
By all means...

Don't leave us hanging! Yes! We want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Why???

Why did you stop at that point? Don't tease us. Lol. Please continue. Pretty please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please..

I have never felt so frustrated..please continue writing..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More!

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
left hanging

You certainly must finish this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes, this is starting out fantastic!

Please, please, please finish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
finish

you need to finish this asap

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sexy tease

Yes please do continue. How did it feel when she ate you out? Did you do it to her? How did you feel afterwards? Did you see her again?

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 7 years ago
Great start

You really should write a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Tease

Your a tease. Yes, please continue this story with more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes please

Yes please write more! I love hearing stories about someone discovering a new side of there sexuality!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot

Kindly write more,the story is awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
rwofogu

Im Not logged in now, but, please finish the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More please

You must finish the story

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