by IMsomebodyBTW
Yeah, ...but, ...it gets a 5-star rating from me!
Rambling, wandering thoughts, first-person story ...almost all the things I don't like, yet this one, this author, this writer pulled it off with style and with erotic emotions. I'm impressed.
If I get my way, this story will continue. And please, if you're tempted to change the writing style, please don't. I don't know how you do it, but it's an impressive method of writing (or else you're just good at it and no one else is?).
Keep up the great work,
That is so well written and erotic. Keep up the good work.
Shame, shame on you for leaving me all up in the air like this.
Why did you stop at that point? Don't tease us. Lol. Please continue. Pretty please.
Yes please do continue. How did it feel when she ate you out? Did you do it to her? How did you feel afterwards? Did you see her again?
Yes please write more! I love hearing stories about someone discovering a new side of there sexuality!