All Comments on 'Her Boyfriend Subs In'

I have had men fuck me before but not with a girl around, it would have been good if she had just let her boyfriend eat her wet pussy, maybe another chapter later? da,cd@frontier.com

If you ever need another stand in, let me know. Would love to have my cherry taken in that fashion!

What a great way to lose your cherry. It’s a wonderful feeling when a guy realizes just how good M2M sex can be. Unfortunately for me, I didn’t find out until I was 43. In one night I sucked 4 cocks and ended up being fucked. It was the best sexual experience I had ever had

What a well written and believable story. It was great to see how Sam morphed from a hetro male to a submissive male slut.

It is clear he is going to be taking a lot of cock in the future.

A few grammatical errors but otherwise a great read. I would gladly pretend to be straight to have such an amazing gay experience! Being the Bi that I am precludes this but what a beautiful fantasy! Thoroughly wish I could suck your cock as a reward for the great work you've done here, as I'm sure would many others! Kudos!

OMG that was HOT!!!

I would love for a man to kiss me while he made love to me.

When Javier stood up in the shower all the while having his cock stuck in Sam's ass really excited me.

Really liked the story.

WOW!

THIS WAS SO FUCKING HOTT!!!! OHHH MY GOD!! PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING!!

Probably your best story. Thank you for the great read. Keep it up:)

I held off on cumming until they started rubbing their cocks together in the shower. That was a really hot story, even though the POV shifted.

Shit, to be Angelica!

In spite of licking the cum off of them, my sticky fingers are now leaving a trail on my keyboard, thanks to your very seductive story. Very sexy. Thank you.

This was the hottest story I’ve read in a long time. It hits on all my fantasies of being watch and being fuck like the slut I am.

You dive off the deep end with drippy metaphors. You can go farther with less of them. This said, I know several people that could play all three parts. Now if I could just get them together.....

This is without a doubt THE hottest story I've ever read. I would have paid for this it's so good. Please please please consider continuing the story.

That is about the hottest story I've read yet! Different situation, but it reminded me so much of the first time I spent a night with another guy. The anticipation of what's going to happen next without knowing what it is. Nor caring.

Loved the slow build, and the romance , and then the boyfirend accepting his sluttines. So good. Thank you for this story

I want to say that I enjoyed this story so much. It's a super hot plot, with good characterization. That being said, the passages that lacked crazy metaphors were much sexier than the ones were I had to stop and wonder where the hell that came from and how it was relevant at all. The weird Pinta, Niña, Santa Maria line was ridiculous.

HOWEVER: If this was written to intentionally make the most off the wall metaphors and still write a sexy, well received story, you hit it. In fact I loved it. I am struggling between sincere word choice advice and praising your wonderfully ridiculous story that knocks readers off course for a moment but still delivers its plot successfully and as hot as possible. The ability to do this is an indicator of a very strong writer, who can write with confidence and humor.

I think you know that you are a very good writer. Although one could guess where it might end up in the latter scenes, you did a very nice job painting an overall seductive picture, and taking us on the journey. I'm sure many of us wished we were "sam"

I put off reading this story for a few days. Mainly because it was so long. Once I got going I couldn't stop. What a story. Could have been my wife and I. Fantastic build up, fantastic insight to each person's thoughts. I was able to visualize exactly what was happening. My cock was so hard reading this story and my explosion at the end was one for the ages. Thank you for this story. Truly incredible and treated me to my best orgasm in a LONG time

man that was one hell of a story. had me wishing I was sam and I was I ever hard and horny.

Tied to the Bed is sill my favorite, but damn this story is just as hot and incredible. I never write comments, but after reading this I had to ;P

There were a few weird sentences, including an incomplete one. The euphemisms were a bit over the top, but otherwise it was very hot.

Man....you did it again. This story might be my favorite out of your entire catologue. Seriously, well done. I love everything about it. keep em coming!

What an incredibly passionate and well written story. You could identify with each of the characters and feel their sexual energy and emotion. Awesome job!

.... while reading this amazing story :)

But what the hell is a "Kyrie Irving map"?

you cant stop now!! What happens next. More please !!

Would love a similar experience.

I have to say that this is the first story I read that is more than just sex. It’s the description of a seduction seen by 3 angles. It is absolutely brilliant.

The scenes are so carefully built, that you feel like you’re there watching and feeling as it happens. It is a voyeur dream.

It’s kind of difficult to believe that this was a very well planned way to get Sam become bi. Please let him stay bi, and enjoy it, and don’t destroy this great writing adding the typical femdom sissifying him, so common in the straight to gay stories.

If I were you, I would remove the metaphors which don’t add but create noise... (if you don’t know Spanish, La Pinta-the looks=Javier-, La Niña -the girl=Sam- y la Santa Maria -St Mary=Angelica-, and you’re not aware that Columbus discovered America in those ships, it won’t make any sense).

In a few words, well written, highly erotic, and a great story as it is or the beginning of a saga... in any case, I love it.

didnt even need to touch it for it to cum, hottest story, makes me with is was sam.

had to pop the buttons on my 501s my c/k jock was wet from my pre your writing is 5 stars all the way

marvelous!

There never was a doubt that Sam would wind up crossing the line into some sort of gay sex (it says so in the category, right?). The way you made it unfold, however, was phenomenal. You conveyed the physicality of their actions quite well. What brought it home so strongly for me was the way you let us into their thoughts. Mmmm, that's so sexy, the mind truly is the largest erogenous zone.

Well. That was well worth staying up late for. ;-)

You have talent at writing. I hope you will always make time to exercise your talent and skill. Thanks for sharing with us.

Wow...OMG...WOW!!!!!!

Enjoyed the seductive story. Set up nicely for another chapter and waiting in anticipation. What does Angelica do now her boyfriend is a cock slut?

Suck my cock slut show your girlfriend how much you love my cock!! Fuck

Slow start in setting up the story but it ended up being a schorcher of a story, very HOT,

Chick comes back to see her guy eating ass, lol love it

Love all the detail. Your decriptions were great. Keep having fun with your writing.

OM effing G, that was so so hot. I was so outrageously hard reading that. Thank you, thank you, thank you

This story is fantastic. Top notch. Love the seduction, the slow build up and his giving in. One of the hottest stories I've read in years.

Absolutely amazing description of the hottest day in Sam’s life. Until tomorrow, that is. Came twice and saving for more later. Hot! Hot! Hot!

This comment is from a girl: This is one of the best stories of all time. I looooove the slow build up. This slory turned me on so much that I had to divide it into about ten sessions :) I could read it again but I’ve started your other stories.

All i have to say is that built up was m a g n i f i c e n t! The moment of penetration happened i literally felt my body vibrate. I don't really enjoy porn, but literotica is my jam and boy do you hit my kinks on the head. Thank you so much for sharing this story. No doubt i'll be back for several rereads.

Omg I’m looking forward to more bout sam being his cock slave now it was truly awesome and my favorite story

I had to divide this up... there was so much goodness I could just waste it... everytime I read your stories I always make sure I have my dildo beside me. Not one of them have proven that i dont need it

this was the one of the only girl involved pairing story that didn't disappoint me in the end. I wasnt thinking omg get rid of her or anything. She was q great addition and she didnt do anything that took away for my yaoi goodness ..when she sucked Jav dick..I was sucking his dick. I was her and baby did i enjoy it.

Anyways thank you for the experience and probably sometime later this week (tomorrow) imma read another of your stories. muah!!!

Thank you for such an incredible story. You laid out the scenes so well and I could picture Javi and Sam in every position. You put the reader right in there, in with Angelica and the hot action. Would be unbelievable to see this as a movie. If you ever try to make this into a video, I’d love to play the role os Sam. Haha.

This was so amazing! I am in love with this story... you really have the writing skill down to perfection. It would be a capital crime if you ever stop writing this kind of story!

Hot as Hell. I had to edge while reading it and the metaphors were a screaming hoot! Reminded me of the time when wife and I were in a Las Vegas sex club and we were laughing as I fucked a young thing and her boyfriend - in front of an audience. Really great sex can be fun .... and funny!

Man, oh, man. Hottest story I have ever read on Literotica. From alpha to bottom. My biggest fantasy.

This story is hott,i love black cock and moved a few years ago and told my ex girlfriend that I had fantasized about black cock when we were together and that's why I did get hard having sex with her but she didn't know I had sex with big black men before we met. When I moved and broke up with her I told her that I found a big older black man and love sucking and riding him.

I love the story and have stroked of to it many times. I’ve always wanted to be fucked in front of my wife she prods my top to bear his cock in my ass.

So so hot! Loved the seduction and the lines blurring and being crossed ALL the way!

Wow this story was so hot! I think it instantly became one of my favorites on here!!! I can t wait for more!!

Sex with an actual plot makes great porn. Turning a guy is always hot. My wife and her boyfriend turned me, it was great.

I rarely find a story where the build up is so sensual and erotik and then just raw sex. This author did an unbelievable job with this story! Damn was this story hot!

This story has to be one of the best erotic stories on this site. The build up was amazing. The sensualality of the story as well as the details made one feel like they were actually in the room watching it unfold. Great writer!

Wow ! Just the best story I have read on this site, if only there was more. Beautifully crafted lead in and perfectly paced story, coming to the best end possible with the new convert completely submissive and cleaning his dom’s hole - going to re-read many times.

You make me want to be Sam -- taking his first cock in both mouth and cunt. Exquisitely written and developed. I would love to see a Continued.

My fantasy to be with 2 guys that would do all this

Have played similar games and they were awesome lol nice others understand the pleasures! Thanks

Wow!! Someone needs to hose me down after that! Angie has my dream job ❤️❤️❤️

I've never been with a guy (have thought about it) but I would gladly take the role of either of the guys in your story. I've read the story a few times and get harder each time

I was totally Involved in the story as it developed. I have to say I had two very hot cums while reading the story. I loved how the story progresses from one scene to the next one wow.

It made very hard I made to chapter 4 before I had finish myself off. Super story.

I have never been with a man, but am drawn to reading and watching gay porn. This story was fabulous, it makes me want to possibly explore why I so enjoy reading Male to male interactions....

This is well written. I got off reading this story. I have had sex with men who it was there first it was hot. None became anal sluts with the first time but several became total bottoms. I found married men become to be sluts once you rim and blow them the first time. I loved the ATM action. I expect a good bottom to clean my cock after i breed them. Keep writing.

This story was so hot! I’ve wanted to be in Sams place so badly. Closest I’ve ever come is getting a massage from man once and felt his fingers linger across my hole a little bit, I arched to let him know I wanted it but our time was up soon after. I called for appt the next week but he was gone.

Keep writing , love all your stories.

Awesome.

WOW!

That was so incredibly hot that I have no words for it! I'm so hard my cock is dripping! It's been a long time since I took the first cock up my ass and no one had to seduce me to do it, but the way you told the story about him finding out what it is like and his need for it was such a turn on. My boyfriend shoots his load inside me all the time and, as used to it as I am, it's always as fantastic as my first time.

I'm mostly straight, been married to a woman for years. I dabbled with boys a bit before I got married. This story is so hot! My cock was rock hard as I read it, imagining myself in Sam's place. Well done.

I am a fairly active Bi Man and as much as I love being fucked bareback or reading of great bi or gay anal sex, I turn off immediately when a cock fresh from a deep anal penetration suddenly is demanded to be sucked. Absolutely not a chance.. Same goes when a anal exercize goes straght to a pussy...

Probably one of the hottest stories here...

In between I was really wishing that this would be my first time with a guy

Absolutely compelling and hot. Hung on every word

Loved it just as much as the first time I read it a year or so ago. One of the best on Literotica. Thanks again for writing.

Anyone know of a similar story or video?

I would love to have a situation like this! The best of both worlds, for sure! I have enjoyed MMF 3somes with 2 of my wives and loved it all! I loved it all!

This is about the best sex story that I have ever read! The story, metaphors, style, content, and the ability to describe the feeling and physical sensations and needs of a guy getting fucked are superb!

I didn't need to be seduced the first time that I got fucked, but I can totally relate to those feelings.

Wonderful story!

Straight guys being seduced has always been my favorite. But rarely can people get it just right, this is one of those times. This was so fucking hot I had to stop touching myself so I could read it through to the end.

I actually loved how many metaphors you included. It added a hint of humor, realness, and relatibility to the situation. I also realized that you have written some of my favorite stories on literotica. Please keeping doing so!

Straight girl here : My words will be redundant about how the story managed the slow and seductive build-up, the complex interaction-dynamic of the characters and some delicious pictures of 2 guys having sex. I wonder how much of these are actual vicarious enactment.

Then a few lines caught my attention and the thinly veiled subtext within,

1) "there are many STRAIGHT guy who need a (GAY) guy to dominate them".

2) "the (HOMOPHOBIC) world needs to shut up and Swallow cum".

3)"STRAIGHT Boyfriend BECOMING a valuable member of The LGBTQ Community".

Many commented about the "realism" and "relatability" part of this story. Maybe plots like this in a way acknowledge these dark, ridiculous fantasies the MEMBERs of this Community bear subconsciously and consciously.

We preach that "your children can't catch the gay from the Gays" but there lies a James Charles who acts on the very instincts and impulses our Gayboi, Javier operates. Or maybe it's a satirical response to the homophobic Straight crowd, the sweet secret revenge on the "no homo" Straight guys. Either it was an interesting, insightful read.

Straight girl here : My words will be redundant about how the story managed the slow and seductive build-up, the complex interaction-dynamic of the characters and some delicious pictures of 2 guys having sex. I wonder how much of these are actual vicarious enactment.

Then a few lines caught my attention and the thinly veiled subtext within,

1) "there are many STRAIGHT guy who need a (GAY) guy to dominate them".

2) "the (HOMOPHOBIC) world needs to shut up and Swallow cum".

3)"STRAIGHT Boyfriend BECOMING a valuable member of The LGBTQ Community".

Many commented about the "realism" and "relatability" part of this story. Maybe plots like this in a way acknowledge these dark, ridiculous fantasies the MEMBERs of this Community bear subconsciously and consciously.

We preach that "your children can't catch the gay from the Gays" but there lies a James Charles who acts on the very instincts and impulses our Gayboi, Javier operates. Or maybe it's a satirical response to the homophobic Straight crowd, the sweet secret revenge on the "no homo" Straight guys. Either it was an interesting, insightful read.

What a tumultuous story!

The Gay dick made the Straights his Cockslut increaseing the Valuable LGBTQ Members, raged war against the Homophobic World to paint it Rainbow with the radioactive CUM!

James Charles must be rolling in his grave!

The sex was amazingly written, but at some point she becomes completely unnecessary, and very intrusive. Just go away. He needs cock now...

That was one of the best stories I ever read, it turned me on like none other ever has, I wish I were Sam, he got to worship the monster cock as it did him every which way, I've never done that but I have always wanted to now I want to more Javier is who I need to meet that man knows what gives another man pleasure, Sam needs the Cock now he wont be able to live without it, he will never be able to duplicate the fucking and loving he just got, I am so horny for a cock now I'm going to run a ad that says I need a endowed man to use me like the slut I want to be

It's great that; the boyfriend was ok with the scene, the model was ok and the girlfriend found it hot. The bisexual guy was indeed bisexual and still was into the girlfriend, the bisexual guy wasn't demeaned or feminized, the girlfriend wasn't suddenly grossed out or repelled by the boyfriend, then all three played together. This is is a great representation of a bisexual scene where everyone's masculinity remained intact, and the woman was totally chill. Well done!

I loved that she got to take a load and then share it with the boyfriend. Also I 'm sure the boyfriends hunger will be need to be fed from now on.

So well written and obviously turned on a lot of people including me until - and it happens in so many of these stories - almost like a formula - a virgin becomes a slut that can't get enough almost instantly - that just leaves me disappointed at the end of a story.

👍👍! 💚.

:)

That’s it. There’s no other words for this, it’s just that sexy. Props to you, writer.

My god, can it be? A gay male story on here that actually has a bit of plot, and some decent writing, *and* clear consent? At the same time?? It is!

Great sexy stuff and some fantastic funny metaphors even if they didn't always work (how the fuck does the ship Pinta fit into its sister ship Nina? And slugs just ain't sexy), but Birnam Wood coming inside Dunsinane means I'll forgive you a lot!

Nice one.

Simply amazing. Reading your stories inspired me to create an account and start writing!

This is such a great job. I love it. I cum every time I read it, without fail. Thank you.

One of the best stories, well done piece of work. Please write a follow up to this.

One of the best stories I have read. Please write more stories like this one. If anyone knows of a video that is similar to this story please post a link

Best story I read yet!

Out fucking standing.

Thank you for addressing my dearest fetish. Does it have a name? What do we call it when 2 men have gay sex with a woman watching? It’s my ultimate fantasy!

Food metaphors were a distraction… but great work

That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Makes me want to be fucked like that. With my girlfriend watching as she is playing with her self

I fucked with several straight dudes while in my 20's and 30's. I got into short term but intense relationships with some of them. Mostly guys freshly out of the military. So they were "in between" and totally free before resuming "normal" life. In my limited experience I found most of them incredibly kinky, voracious and unhinibited probably to make the most of a one time or a few weeks/months experience. So yes in accordance with this fictitious story: once the gates open there is little or no limits.

[He felt like hornier than he could ever remember being.]

[He wrapped his legs around Javier and the boys kissed softly while they made love.]

[She wondered as she sipped her java what this would mean for the complexities of her sexual relationship with Sam]

Really? At this rate, what use would Sam *have* for Angelica sexually? Seems he's gotten more from Javier than from her.

If so, serves her right. She's the one who thought it would be such a good idea.

This was the best story of this kind I have ever read. I am still dripping pre-cum like a faucet.