All Comments on 'Her Daddy, Dom, and Neighbor in One Ch. 02'

But your story is hot. I want to know more about the people you write about and I love the beginning relationship between them.

Concise character development, no wasted frills.

Much, Much More Please.

Okay... I am involved now! lol. I love your characters! I sure hope you're busy writing more chapterS :D Thanks so much!

MastersWench

I love your writing, you make me feel the emotions of your characters. Please continue this story.

Please please please continue!!! The tenderness and passion you expressed so well is almost heartbreakingly sweet. I love it!

Please keep writing. It is sort of a shame that the nature of their relationship will be revealed. It was also hard I thought as I read it for Max to carry out the more severe punishment as he had to remind himself if he was too soft she would not learn. A little unfair given he asked her for the pictures but he is right she had no idea who or what type of person she was sending them to.

Loved them!!!!! Please write more !!

Can't wait to see how this develops!

After some time i relised i was probably a submisive. This story made me relise i need a daddy dom. Thank you so much for opening this up to me.

I thought the punishment was a bit harsh. For a first time, I mean. I understand why. Her innocence could have gotten her in a lot of trouble. Her reaction, though, makes me think she is able to handle it. Max has been her dream lover for a long time. Her joy at truly being His helped her through it. Now I want to see Zach 's reaction. JudyLee

Love this story cant wait to read more. I dont understand the punishment though. Yes it could have not been him but it turns out it was. The punishment isnt really justified - bit confusing.

OMG!! Excellent stuff!! And soooooooooo HOT!! I need me a Max!

You got one difficult part just right. The fight within between the Daddy and the Sir/Master, well done not many get it. I really enjoyed this chapter

simply beautiful...