by unpublaauthor
Best description of this story (and series). It's also a great description of DDlg. Sweet when it needs to be and rough when it needs to be as well.
Max and Cassie's relationship is getting to where it has longed to be for a long time. Fantastic writing.
I love this story! It's such a pleasure to read. Your writing style makes reading it effortless, freeing me to simply enjoy the story. Hot story too, btw! :D
MastersWench
I like how this story has progressed. I hope you are able to complete the other I am not sure if you said they were projects or not but I hope you can get back to this in a reasonable length of time. Both of these characters were wrong and both paid the price and Max may still be earning her complete trust again. I thought it was interesting that her punishment was only five strikes but it was with a fairly severe instrument, however the user decides how severe. I am certain since she had not been punished it was difficult to fathom for her but she did not beg to get out of it and took it as was expected. This is a loving story and everyone makes mistakes especially in the beginning. I want to know what is going to happen next now that Zandler has discovered who Max's little one is. So I will be waiting for your next submission. I am gentleoneexplorer but for some reason can't seem to log in and have written but got no response. I hope someone can help me get logged back in as even when I change my password it is not recognized. Sorry for using this area to try and get some help but I need to get logged back in.
This chapter. I love how they are both learning and growing in their new roles. I am curious to know what happens next now that Zander is aware of their relationship. I hope you wil be able to come back to continue it soon.
Love it!!! Can't wait to see what happens next! Is Zander getting a story? Curious about him now... Thank you for all your hard work, you rock xxx
Aww come on it was getting to the good part. Please hurry with your other projects.
Dam Girl You only Get better with every part of this story. then You end it at Just the right point to keep us guessing what is next.I gave You a five Stars But That dang sure is not enough. Keep it coming and Pleaseeeeeeeeeee don't take so long for the next part.
Chapter 5 if forthcoming. I'm going to try to blitz through a few projects (a couple of chapters of Bitsy's Inhuman Submission, a project that no one has seen yet, another chapter or two of The Haunted Dungeon). I will say this: Chapter 5 will be the last of Cassie and Max's story; however, the true resolution will be in Zander and Cami's story (name undecided).
Why didn't Cassie just explain that she was looking for a hanger? She should have backed out and locked the door when she realized what it was. But 2 days in a row with really hard spankings. Now a 3rd one with a harsh paddle. She hasn't had time to heal. He could really injure her. As a pain slut, she will take everything he gives. It's up to him as her Dom to know when to stop. Now Zander knows. What next? JudyLee
To the next chapter. I am interested in knowing more about Zander and Cami story as well as what is in store for this babygirl and her Daddy. Please don't make us wait too long for chapter 5.
Such deliciousness. The writer in me, wants to critique, but the Dom, and Romantic in me is so turned on!
Am patiently waiting for more of this series. Please don't leave it so open ended. Would like more chapters that explore their relationship.
Omg, you totally just left me hanging, and not to mention HOT!
Am getting desperate for the last chapter of this story and then the Zander one. Please please post the last chapter xxxx
Hi :)
Thanks for writing such a great story!
But, I think Daddy got off easy in chapter 3.
I also think it's bad form to take his anger out on her in 4, punishing her for going into his dungeon. She didn't have any rules, the key was right there. She should have gotten a lecture, certainly not that paddle.
On my way to 5...
This is the first one of your stories I've read (this series). It is also the first BDSM stories I've read. Thinking I've found a new favorite author and category. Really hoping part 5 isn't the last in this series. And I agree with the comment about doing a series with Zander and Cami.