All Comments on 'Her Daughter's Husband Ch. 02'
by Big Gunz
- 9 Comments
LordSlamdawggover 8 years agoIt's a little TOO timeless. This could have been written in 2015 or 1965. These people are quirk free outside of stereotyped roles in this passion play. I don't want to diss story or writer but would say a lot of work went into constructing this story and with ju st a bit more , the author can imprint his own signature indelibly.
Excellent scene, however , of daughter and father in light elevated place blind to cheaters skulking below in dark. Very symbolic. Full marks for that one inspired snapshot. *****
Anonymousover 8 years agoA desert is a sandy, arid location where there is little rain. A dessert is an after dinner sweet (usually). I think you meant dessert, a sweet, not an arid location.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI could have been in this story up to the point where he starts calling her a whore and a slut and creates a situation where exposure is a strong possibility. I have cheated but could never treat a woman/lover like that.
NewOldGuy77over 3 years agoWhat will happen when his wife gets pregnant? Will Kayla step up her cheating?
