All Comments on 'her Devotion to Him Ch. 14'

stop now... I mean it... stop before she leaves you... christ mate, if you have to cap and not cap like that, just to get across who is the sub and who is the Dom(me) then you have a lot to learn. Some people can get away with it because their writing speaks for itself. "Llovers"? c'mon.

It's not just butchering the language, and it's not just some supposed 'way of doing things' in the lifestyle. What it is is rubbish. End of story. Thank christ.

i found it quite hard and annoying to read due to the mix up of 'his' and 'her'

make sure to use spell check and reread it.

other than that, had an ok storyline. well done

please write more