All Comments on 'Her Dirty Little Secret Pt. 01'

by silverwingeddemon

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LunarLilithLunarLilithover 8 years ago
Great start!

I love the original setting and premise. Can't wait to see where you take it.

wolf9696wolf9696over 8 years ago
5/5

Liked it... will wait for ch.2... :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
cant wait to see the rest.

definitely worth reading.

LustfulPassionLustfulPassionover 8 years ago

Loved it! I can't wait for the second chapter. A few grammatical errors but nothing some proof reading couldn't fix (very minor errors) I hope to read more soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great

Good writer you are. One more chapter, hope the story finishes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really Liked

I usually bypass stories with elves but yours really interested me. Great job 5 stars xo <3

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