All Comments on 'Her Dirty Secrets Pt. 01'

The plot at this stage is not complete, and I assume will become clear in the next chapters. Her situation is different, a single widow with children to support. The opening scene is painful to the protagonists who needs money, but well done. Scene two is more in keeping with her needs and satisfying to the male. Her home routine is clearly described, as is her need for self-induced satisfaction. This need is intriguing and unexplained. The writing style is very good. Going to chapter two.