by ReginaFilangie
A. It's non-consent. When she said no, that made anything that happens later rape.
B. It's IR. Just another giant black dong/white slut racist piece of garbage. Because all black men, are rapists, of course, and all white women want to be raped by giant black dongs. Once then get going, naturally, they discover that they really enjoy being raped by the giant black dong. Among the most disgusting stories I've seen.
And of course, the pathetic white husband is a huge weenie, not getting the job done. And the closing line, "Yes, Master, anything you say." Maybe the stupidest line ever written.
Grow a brain and post this where sick people who enjoy such fantasies gather, like non-con or IR. I only read the first couple of paragraphs, and that was enough. I'll never read another by this author.
I was going to comment, but I think kimi said it all quite well.
As a beer drinking fatso with a small dick who cant get it up even his hot as hell wife tries to seduce him. This has been done to death and is boring as fuck. Why not make him a eunach or gay or something while youre at it.
You want to write shit, go ahead, just have the common fucking decency to post it in Ir or better yet, non erotic.
If her husband was like that why in hell didn't she divorced him a long time ago? Now she could marry her boss...Wait..her boss wouldn't ever marry a whore with no self respect! He will be using her just to increase his profits...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
I skimmed through the last part. You are living in a fantasy world that doesn't exist. No stars.
Keep going....why do these people read this stuff if they dislike it so????
Nothing worth reading. A bunch of non-erotic drivel. That's all folks.
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote! Annony sucks and swallows!!
Bonnie are you describing yourself? Isn't sucking and swallowing your specialty, or do you just go house to house gathering cream pies in your neighborhood or both?
Badly written, mediocre sex scenes and characters that are dumber than rocks.
No stars as even giving this drivel one star would be an insult to the star.
what sewer did you crawl out of author? The name of this site is Literotica, not Shiterotica.
I'm sick of the stereotype niggers portrayed on this site no nigger has an above average dick and they're all queer
White sluts and NIGGERS?
All these white bitches should be chocked to death by a big white cock blocking her air passage.
This site sure has gone to shit with wanna-be authors.
jwp - because they're closet cucks. They read this stuff and masturbate to it, then feel this intense shame aftewards. The only outlet they have is to bash the author. Once the shame fades them come back here to jerk it to these same stories, fantasizing about their wives getting fucked by better men. They blow their load, and the cycle repeats. Sad.
welcome to the cess pool called "loving wives story comments"
I don't care how little the moderators are paid, it's far too much
thanks for writing and posting
you mean, like, kind of when people express rage and hatred over what others find to be erotic?
do you mean...like that?
this story delivers precisely what it indicated by its title and tag line. no surprises
if an author fails to tag a story properly, I will get in line with you.
no one likes to waste time reading a story that's not for them
I'm continually perplexed by the form of human reasoning employed that compels persons to hover their mouse and click on stories that they KNOW they will hate.
Who has time for that?
In my opinion the story-line should have been split in two 'short and sweet' chapters.
The first one should have ended when she comes home after her boss fucked her for the first time & her hubby has surprised her with dinner.
That chapter should have been in non-consent/reluctance category.
The rest would be Ch. 2 (in BDSM category).
I will read your other stories.
A DUMB and RACIST BOSS! Is she really that hard-up?
This story has so far got 55,608 views including 36 favorites; that is 0.645 favorites per 1,000 views. When a story gets over 0.5 faves per thousand views, it indicates that readers really really like it.
This twit only made one entry into LW. Guess TediousShadow scared her by kissing her ass just after she dipped in the cesspool.
This story has so far got 40 faves out of 58,940 views which is 0.68 faves per 1K views (an A-plus faves-to-views ratio!)
The story is very erotic, outright kinky, but it was posted in the wrong category: it belongs to Non-consent/reluctance and/or BDSM categories.
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Matt picked her up and laid her across Jon's desk. He parted her legs, lifted her skirt, and went down on her.
"Yes! Yes! Lick my cunt! That feels so good!" She spread her legs wide. No one had eaten her out in years. He swirled his tongue around her clit then lapped at the sensitive underside.
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... She wanted to tear off his and her own clothes right then and there and jump on him. She quickly left the room before she embarrassed herself.
At 5pm, when the building was emptying out, he asked her into his office. She was excited and nervous. She really wanted to be fucked but didn't know what to expect from him...
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She really wanted to be fucked but didn't know what to expect from him. Right away, he ordered her to strip naked. She obliged, trying not to look too eager.
... "Come sit on my lap." She did as he bade, with her stark naked and him still fully dressed. He kissed her slowly and deeply, delving into her mouth and stroking the insides of her mouth with his tongue. She wanted to melt. She kissed him back with fervor...
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I had a dominant male boss years ago. I was married and had two sons.
In his presence I was submissive. He felt that.
He was fucking me, goes without saying.
It is complicated to have an affair at work and your family at home: one practically lives in 2 narratives, which tends to be psychologically draining.
I did not know how to end the affair. I was hesitant to break up as if I owed him something.
If truth be told he was good in bed: he knew how to fuck and his staying power was above expectations.
The company was bought and I got a new boss. My ex-boss and I stayed in touch as friends.