All Comments on 'Her Enemy's Embrace Ch. 01'

by AubriannaJaide

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice start

You have made a nice start to your story. My only comment would be to have more content in each chapter or your story will be hundreds of chapters long, and I hope it will be long and as interesting as it has started out to be.

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