All Comments on 'Her Fiancé's Father Ch. 03'

What a yummy story!! please continue the good Work!! :)

Oh my God, you've done it again! I'm glad you revisited Jack after your exertions with Aablar ;)

Keep it up,

Janeuk

Would love it if you'd continue with this story. More with Trixie Ann would be nice.

Some sub-chapters would be interesting on this story. Did Trixie Ann get preggie with all that cum deep in her womb?

Great story telling. The pace was perfect.

This is a really great series. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Jack is quite the rogue.

Jack is a dastardly cad and my hero. Keep it up! (literally). 5 stars.

Great writing and hot sex, BUT Un-Science Fiction. jxa really? please learn about human female anatomy. No penis enters a cervical opening during sex. a large fully erect one simply slides by it as the vagina expands to take the penis. With a correct understanding of the insides of a vagina, this story would be more than worthy of a number larger than five. AND there was no need for the foolishness. Learn how a pussy works, women deserve that if you are going to write about them. Google them, you have a computer. Or better yet explore one, then google it. Pussies are such wonderful things they deserve to be presented truthfully with full appreciation of how they work. :-)

I have on many occasions slipped past my wifes cervix and felt the ring around my rod. only those with short peckers think you cannot enter the cervix. I did'nt know what it was until my wife told me.