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"Can I take your order?" she faltered as she same closer.
"What time do you get off, Bethany?" asked Jack.
- COMMENTS
Hiker66Bikerover 2 years agoThis yarn is so over-the-top it reads like the hormonal fantasy of a sex crazed 14 year old schoolboy. In this series the MC (Jack) has morphed into a cartoon sex addict lothario who shoves his hand up the skirt of every passing woman without any attempt at seduction and none of the women object. In this fantasy world there are no STDs, contraception or 'sexual assault' charges. I like erotica to be grounded in reality so that the reader is left thinking 'yes, this could actually happen, or this scenario must have happened somewhere sometime'. In this bizarre plot we are expected to believe that a cultured woman would allow herself to be impaled on a bottle in a high end restaurant. The series feels like a soap opera which has run run well past it's 'sell by' date and needs to be humanely put down. 2 stars.
MajorRewriteover 5 years agoThe crazy over-the-top aspects of the story are what makes it fun and hot.
sandbanksover 10 years agoYour stories have a certain sexual ruggedness to them, which you haven't let wean off over the time. Hope you don't keep so long between stories. The more debauched the scenarios are the more characteristics it becomes of Jack. Perhaps, Isabelle too needs a little bit of more detailing about her other sexual escapades. And also, maybe, another scene with Jack and his wife, voyeured by Isabelle and Martin again!
