All Comments on 'Her Friend's Promotional Party'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Incredibly stupid and ugly. Pathetic Main character, can't call him a man because he certainly doesn't act like one toward his wife. Hard to figure if the writing comes from the heart or the mind in general, but you'd have to be a pretty Twisted mind and a very ugly heart to write this.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Just another female writer that hates men? Certainly made a point of making the two male characters here either we can stupid or arrogant and animalistic. Just pushing another feminist agenda?

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Insta whore? Seriously, its like a brain damaged 14 year olds ridiculous wet dream.

PolyLvrPolyLvrover 3 years ago
Torn

I actually liked most of the story. At the end however, should have just told him to fuck off and die, then throw herself on her husband's mercy.

The writing was atrocious, though. Spelling mistakes abound along with the wrong form of word usage.

Read more works on here and keep trying

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just disgusting

What a sick husband and stupid wife. The author must like to make their characters weak and spineless

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Who

Who the hell is this bonnietaylor thing who gives out 5s like she does blowjobs?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

What was the point of this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great story

This is what I wanted from my wife........ but got it from a girlfriend after my divorce. But she never charged lol.

retmstrretmstrabout 9 years ago
***

Larry is not the ass. He's an opportunist. The unnamed husband is the wimp ass. As soon as Larry's hand was on his wife's knee he should have stood up and cold cocked him. Story sucks. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
re: cardboard character is you dear annony.

Right. You keep posting "comments" slamming others for daring to have a different opinion, and THEY'RE the losers? On what fucking planet, asshole?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
that's loser,

you bimbo

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 9 years ago
cardboard character is you dear annony.

everytime you comment like that it tells us all what a looser you are. gave it a 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wish it was my wife

hope she becums his slut

becontree2001ukbecontree2001ukabout 9 years ago

I hope you will be writing a part 2. Love to read more

tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
WHO ARE WHAT TO BLAME

the booze or the personality trait. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
shouldn't

Shouldn't there be one wife who will fight blackmail? Of course, her hubby here has no spine, so I guess she was right.

patilliepatillieabout 9 years ago
If that is your photo you are very cute

but when writing in the tough Loving Wife's section you have to be ready for the slings and arrows. Decent premise, although the hubby's acceptance of the friend inside his wife is a bit shocking, it is never explained-just kinda ho hum, it happened.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
WACC

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bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 9 years ago
Liked the story

gave you a 5 and hope you'll continue it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
If anyone needs to seek help it the fool who reads all of these stories

and then tells everyone he hates them. WTF is wrong with you dear annony? You must be a retarded pig, and I mean no offense to the pig!! Gave you a 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
what a moron!

Another wimp cuck story.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best Story I have read in a long time!

What will happen next?

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