by BlueMorpho
Lovely, one of the most difficult punishments for a sub (myself especially) is to watch my Master giving and getting pleasure for another because i disobeyed and am not allowed to please Him. Well written
As has been touched on, I too enjoyed the "forced" side of "Her Master's Gift" the most. And also, the certain piquant tang of sadism it contained.
I feel you've captured wonderfully well that the power exerted over one by another can be as much a focal point as the sexual acts themselves.
I thoroughly enjoyed it; surprising in itself as quite often the main attraction to a story for me is: "Does it hurt you? I hope it does, cause then I enjoy it more."
~ A very pleasant surprise.
@>,-'Kylan,-'
Very well written and truly a difficult punishment to take, but I have to wonder what she was punished for to receive such a harsh emotional punishment. The Domme was awesome in the story, she was careful of the submissive and gave her praise once it was over for taking her punishment. I have to wonder if her Dom was just as caring of his submissive afterwards.