All Comments on 'Her Moans'

touching and affectionate story.Well done!

I really enjoyed the unhurried pace of your story. It rings of truth and allows the reader to get aroused at a natural pace. One thing though. Why the prediction of remorse. I can't imagine anyone feeling any remorse until perhaps later. There's no way that I could imagine anything except wanting to do it again. Thanks for the good read.

Totally got a chub reading this story, but( there is always a butt in stories like this) With a bit of refining your descriptions. Your stories will rise your readers libitos to a full on turn on. Thanks for the story!

deliciously told.

yummy

My cousin Smita is owner of most beautiful ass and once she offered it to me when her lover failed to open it with his cock and so I took her anal virginity with a hot fuck.

Very sweet and well written, unhurried and with a feeling of truth about it. I enjoyed it immensely, well done, 5 stars!

My cousin Smita is owner of most beautiful ass and once she offered it to me when her lover failed to open it with his cock and so I took her anal virginity with a hot fuck.

Easy reading. Good start. Verbiage sounds remarkably close to another Literotica member. Hope there's more to come.

....lol, I swear, if they said 'oh' one more time..... ;)

I have read 4 of your stories.

Best one

Good story, but OH!, so many OH's.

Good premise.

But sex is too mechanical.

Three stars.