by Writer345
I have also read 'Pet' and can see links between the stories. Is there a reading order for your other stories?
Keep up the good work.
Tom D
Way Better ending than the story with Milly Dani & Wendy.
I'm awarding this One 5 🌟's
I really liked the read. I just wish there were more details about the first time that you and your daughter had sex, and/or when Linnie was turned and a threesome with her. Other than those additions, it is great.
You gave us a nice deep insight into the mother's psyche, but waited very long for the daughter's actual "turning". Buildup is good, but don't skip the finale! You glanced over their lovemaking and gave us just a quick conclusion.
I wish you actually gave us any of that anticipated mother-daughter sex and explored the dynamics of their highly unconventional relationship. You teased us with it before - does Sammi want Cat to hurt her? Who dominates whom, and in what ways? Do they have doubts or regrets and how do they deal with them? How does their previous relationship reflect on their sexual life?
Sorry for the one star because I meant to put 4 stars. I have never rated any story I hv read so urs is the first. I found it to be very interesting and loved reading it.
I really enjoyed the story...how it led down the path to a Wonderful conclusion. I'm going to reading more of your work. Thanks!!!!!
U set it for cat to be the lead but then have her semi submit to her daughter