All Comments on 'Her Mother's Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Abrupt ending

Enjoyed the lead up but ended too abruptly. Not enough dialogue, but what there was of it was good. Just need to push it out a little longer. Great quickie read though.

peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
so naughty, so good

great NC/incest story. well written, great tension and struggles. thanks for that.

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