All Comments on 'Her Name Was....Amanda Ch. 07'

by bonnietaylor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent story that keeps you wondering what will

happen next. The sex is hot and the teasing is lustful. I hope this has a 100 chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Didn't see that coming Bonnie, God you got me

spuer hard and then hearing her tell her lover that I came all over my hand and stomach! Thanks for a great orgasm! Loved it, love all the chapters. Now make him her bitch and her his! They wll have the best sex either of them have had. He is a very lucky man to have a lover so will like you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow

Great writing and story... I want to see him become her bitch!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Your writing is atrocious.

Spelling, tense, sentence structure, paragraph flow. Basic rules of grammar. Your writing is beyond bad.

RetiredCappyRetiredCappyover 1 year ago

Great story. Look forward to the next few chapters. You might want to have someone proof read the spelling. I really got off on Bobby worshipping her breasts and look forward to their future fucking and maybe a few copious facials.

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