by ThaDee
Good second part, I like where it's going and wonder what will happen when other people start to arrive
Good second chapter. Very explicit and erotic lol And entertaining!
Good stuff, you write well and the pacing and descriptions are great. Looking forward to seeing how the story evolves going forward. Keep up the good work.
But before bed he watches tv? Seriously, you're an idiot. Try, just try to do that day after day, night after night and see what happens. I did that in my early 30's and it almost killed me, I couldn't even dream of it in my 40's.
And she's not a perfect 10. Neither is she some 20 something bimbo, she's middle aged, she's put on weight, she's got wrinkles and stretch marks and everything that makes a woman. So for her to call a younger man "Daddy" is out of character, it doesn't fit.
Wow, I believe the little knocked up Redhead mother, wife will take a permanent trip to the corner in the hood to earn some money for Lennox !!! She will love black cock more.
Is someone fixated with the former heavyweight dreadlocked boxer 🥊 Lennox Lewis. It does seem to tick all the boxes.
i read both so hot and true to life i know
been there and still am can not do with BBC now
cheryl_4fun
in miss where it is so taboo
I enjoyed it very much. I want to hear what happens when the daughter gets home! :)
oh the questions, will he share her with his dealer, others? will she share him with the daughter? will she have a choice? will they turn her/them for 3 holes? mmmm to be a redhead housewife.....
more please....
Your writing is impressive. The story keeps the big black cock mythology alive and well. But if I want reality I’ll look in the mirror. I’m not going to criticize you for the speed in how this progressed because you just trimmed a ton of the dialogue and got right to the meat... so to speak.