by QuartzErotica
For a first erotic story this was good , i enjoyed it.
Avery seems like shes in her element controlling the situation. Carnt wait to See what happens in next chapter with Anna and Amber.The build up all adds to fun of the sex in my opinion.
I am wondering why Amber wanted to transfer to a new college?
Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing
Who could ask for more? I could -- and do! Please write more and share your lovely stories with us. Five stars.
sorry, but I can't see being blackmailed in a sorority, maybe staying into one but not getting into one, maybe part 2 will make better sense of this
Coercion like this makes it nonconsent/reluctance, even if lesbian sex is or will be involved.
I have read this again and except for the ending it was good, ok for me loose the handcuffs, other than that it was alright
I thought it was a very nice way to start off somewhat slow and just introduce the characters. I could tell this is going to be a dominant/submissive story from the beginning, so don't listen to anyone saying no to the cuffs, or any other toys used in disciplining the character. Keep up the good work and I hope to see you again.
I know such fantasy are hot! And I know sometimes when you try to make a story of of it, there are a couple of contradictions. But never mind - I like the story, and I like it even more knowing there is a real girl's fantasy behind it who enjoyed to make it up. I hope you will not run short of ideas.
DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT for the love of god, DO IT.
*ahem*
I-I mean, please continue.
please please continue. I liked the slow start introducing the characters and the ending got me wet. I really want to find out what happens next.