All Comments on 'Her Secret Crush Ch. 03'

I love your stories you make them unusual and have a lot of detail so you feel like you are right there watching. Please keep writing on these three.

i love this series. keep up the extremely good work.

one minor nit: is it just me or did drew and adam's name switch in this third installment?

mmmmm it was AMAZING. update sooon plllease!!!

Loved your story but I can't help feeling confused. In the first chapter of this series it says Drew is the Step brother. Not too sure about the 2nd chapter but in the 3rd Adam is now the step brother and Drew is the friend. Do you mind clarifying this? Thanks

this was incredible. one of the best literotica stories ive ever read. hope there is lots more installments!!

I loved it, but I gotta agree... it was kinda grr to have the blonde step brother change names from Andrew to Adam in chapter 3. Still an awesome story- hopefully more to come?

i enjoyed your story but it could use a little more build up to get into it and to develop it - overall, a good start

Should have had an underwater blow job and underwater fuck.

you didn't switch the names around.

I thought originally that DREW was the stepbrother and ADAM was his friend - Ch. 3 switched them around - by the way - this is not incest but is still a great story

The characters are confusing me too much. One moment Drew is the brother and then Adam becomes the brother. Since this has been going on for three chapters I'm not sure I want to continue.

It REALLY annoys me that your characters have swapped names. I can overlook grammar errors and typos but I cannot get past the fact that you can't even keep track of your own characters.

Attention to detail is what makes a good story great.

It's dissapointing because it is a great series but I dont know if I can continue with this confusion.

i really like the story line and the anticipation, but when you continuously mix up the names of the boys it makes it hard to read and kind of ruined the mood for me

i agreee i got lost many times trying to decied who was doin wat from here it is a great story

you seem to have a little problem keeping the names in the correct order. while the story is a good one, it gets increasingly frustrating when we have to try to figure ut who is who. please re-read and edit accordingly.

Loved the story just wish you'd of remembered who's the brother and who's the friend!

So annoyed you couldn't even keep track of your characters!

I love the idea but sometimes I have to read back just to check who is who!! Not good in that aspect!!

Another great chapter! Lol, now it seems the names are flip flopped! Originally Drew was the step-brother but in this ch Adam is the step, hehe. Oh well, fun fun fun!! :). They better work out their jealousy issues though! Prolly wouldnt hurt to sit down and talk with her instead of just fucking her, hehehe!