All Comments on 'Her Son-in-Law's Best Friend'

by Mike_Ellen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I LIKE YOUR STORY

The opening was a bit confusing for me in part owing to the number of times less interesting writer's will begin a piece with the full divulgence of character stat's. I had forgotten how nice it is to have characters reveal themselves and their relationships through the authors work.

I am looking forward to a second chapter.

Put a bush on someone in this sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5

All right.

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