All Comments on 'Her True Self Ch. 04'

This has to be the worst story I've ever read.

No character development at all - it's quite clear that the author would prefer she didn't have a character. No wonder auditguy is single.

If there is a future story I might try to involve a plot, but thanks for reading to the end and leaving feedback. I’ll take it constructively.

So beautiful. I can't understand how some people don't like this series.

Not worth reading

I love degradation and humiliation as much as the next person but there isn't really a theme here it's just a bunch of random humiliating details, I don't know it feels messy. Also if you're going to make it seem realistic, maybe you should tone it down some and then get increasingly more intense as the series goes on. I'm really sad for this girl that she's pregnant at only 18 by this man who clearly doesnt care for her at all because he ignores her health and well being. Another note: I highly doubt McDonalds would keep an employee that masturbates in the kitchen. Just keep it realistic.