All Comments on 'Her Victorian Bottom Shared Ch. 01'

by Ian56

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Ian56Ian56about 8 years agoAuthor
Note from Author.

Just a short notice that Chapter 2 has just been submitted and Chapter 3 is also ready to go in this 3 part series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Strong story!

Ian56 has captured the essence of Victorian (Edwardian?) literature: outward respectability hiding private debauchery. Hope to read more from this talented author.

roveroneroveroneover 6 years ago
Liked it a lot!

VERY hot and properly written in the tone/language of the time.

Looking forward to the next two chapters!

5 + a fave story/author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Technicality

Since she is a widow, Lizzie should be called Mrs. Armitage, rather than Miss.

LordMorningwoodLordMorningwoodabout 6 years ago
Authentic Victorian naughtiness!

My fancy often turns to era of corsets and bloomers, and this is beautifully written, with the perfect combination of elegant formality and earthy crudity. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Found a major faux pas; married woman in Victorian times would be called Mrs. never Miss. even if a widow. She may go back to her maiden name, but never would she be a Miss again.

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