All Comments on 'Here for You Ch. 07-08'

by warpedmuser

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
One page?

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story

Found your story by accident & it's a very good read.

Please keep it going.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please Continue

Good story! Please keep it coming!

DestinyReaderDestinyReaderover 7 years ago
good story

Can't wait for the next chapters.

bruce22bruce22over 7 years ago
Where is this Indian resteraunt?

Nothing like a curry to warm things up! It does not appear that he is a hurry to follow up her remark.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Going from Saturday to Friday??

I've noticed the days of the week don't flow, in this chapter he does a luncheon on Saturday for his employees and asks Elle out for the next night but then at the restaurant she mentions it's Friday night.

warpedmuserwarpedmuserover 7 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous#2

Well spotted! Sorry for the mistake! Wow, I hope I didn't repeat the same mistake...

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