by Harddaysknight
I must be stoopid! I never saw that one coming! Great job as usual! Love the stories you tell! They may not be the "hottest' for stroking (like I need to?) but they rank up there as some of the best for pure entertainment!
I am jealous!
It was great. I figured she recognized who he was when she
unzipped his pants.
These last few stories will be hard to top, but thanks for the
attempts.
Great work - you are becoming quite the story teller - as you can see we like your theme (Comments and Scores)- More Please - Thanks and Regards
like most of the readers you really had me going on, but when she didn't make a fuss on when he said it was "over" I knew there was a big smiling coming from somewhere.
Thank you.
I think George is lucky he didn't receive more punishment. Hitting a woman isn't allowed!!! Hitting another man's wife definitely isn't allowed!! Especially if hubby finds out!
When she said she had never been unfaithful is when I guessed she knew it was him the night before. What a little devil, huh?
Keep these stories coming, guy! You're doing great!!!
Very good job enough tension to be fun while keeping it believeable. A pat on the back and toast are in order. When your at the CORNER pub the Lizard owes you a drink.
Again Bravo
This was just too, too delicious. But I saw it coming this time. I wasn't sure how she knew, but the change from the woman who slapped the crap out of that ass to the simpering ravager of "her hero" gave it away to me. But that's okay. I loved sitting there with the huge smile on my face while we all awaited the revelation at the end.
...till the end that every thing was going to fall apart but you came thru for me again. I look forward to your stories.
this was a great loving wife story... I never saw the ending comming. Well written very good so please give us more
You just keep doing good stuff. With believable characters. More More
Jim
What a fucking moron this guy is. Does he really think his wife wouldn't know it was him after being married all those years. Come on......your better than this.
You get better with every story.
I am a lucky guy that gets pleasured by your writng.
The shoes were a unique way of the wife siscovering her husband's ruse.
You are a good writer! Period! This story was a little predictable and I seen the ending before I read it. But still a great read! I would have prefered more twist Like some of your other excellent stories! But the newer stories have been absolutly Awesome! I have seen your future and now I have some of your past where you are headed is the best place to be and I have seen you grow wiser in your stories. Thank you!
Sexmate
Nice story with an imaginative twist (even if it is predictable). The way your mind works I expect you'll be keeping us all well pleased for years to come.
sweet, and romantic. And absolutely lovely. You are a fantastic writer with a wonderful gift.
Has anyone noticed how those making negative comments are less articulate than those who liked it. Makes me think that the story was too complex for some of the less bright visitors - those with the anonymous handles.
im sure that there are some men that like to watch their wife fuck other men, but that is a small percentage, but its a majority here in literotica. Stories like this and even the one where the hubby catch the wife, then leaves her are more of the norm and more realistic.. enjoyed this one very much
They say "Clothes make the man." and this story proves that footwear can too. ;)
Thanks, HDK, for an enjoyable tale.
Everyone got what they deserved, Libby got the hard pounding she wanted, Will got to be a hero and get the gril and George got a beating he so richly needed and will not forget for a loooong time. Great Story
One of the commenters mentioned the higher percent of men that like to watch other women on Literotica then in real life; DUH !!....All readers are voyers !
I'm following the Faverite Authors list and enjoyed most of Hardaysknight's stories as I read down his list.
Wish Literotica could sort by date and catagory too.
Another one of your best stories... It was Awesome how the wife figured it out, even before she saw his shoes! Thank god he was going to leave her if she hadn't known it was her husband... To many damn cuckolded men stories on her! Great job
This was scary because it had all the earmarks of a consequences story and then at the last second the author pulls it out of the fire. I wonder if HDK wrote the whole
to a divorce and then just substituted for the new ending!
Great work!
Even when I already knew what's coming (I guess I was at awe at the first reading and forgot to comment - Oh, the shame!). <P>
It's simple - just write like HDK, and coming back to the same story would feel fresh every time!
The ending might have been prolonged by Libby asking her husband for proof she had been unfaithful...
No question she had figured something out just could not figure out how -
I half expected you to have her ask why it took so long for him to get back home with his own car to clue him in at least a bit -
I'm a sucker for the happy ending no unfaithfulness took place variety in this genre. Thanks!
That poor critter! Getting beat up is one thing but tossed into thorns is quite another.
Nice love story this section could use a couple more of these on a regular basis
Wow! A truly beautiful story. A loving wife and a wonderful twist. One of my favorites. Thanks.
she had acknowledged that she knew it was him and invited him in when they got home. But to let him leave and check on to a motel for the night throws too many doubts into her behavior and her credibility.
His behavior was shitty. He didn't care until he got his nut off. Hell he is the one that would be the cheater. He stated he was too hot to care. A sure sign of a weak minded individual. Don't bitch at her, bitch at him
try and fool them it might just be a turn around turn on, TK U MLJ LV NV
Married 20 something years, and you expect us to believe she only recognized him because of his shoes? Some raggedy clothes, and a bit of dirt, and you want us to believe that NONE of his friends recognized him? If she was my wife, I would DEFINITELY divorce her, if, after 23 years, she could only know me by my fucking shoes!
I don't believe her and he is an asshole. Let's just give this a no rating.
Much like "Goofy & My Wife" and this one. Halloween, Mardi Gras, room mixups; the variations are endless. The sex play and ending were better were more enjoyable than "Helter Skelter." Perhaps that is why this scored better. You might have stretched of the party. Perhaps with the ananymous protagonist copping a feel here and there.
Why do you consistently refuse to accept the facts as they are written, and try to re-write them to fit YOUR scenario?
Nobody recognized him because his face was completely wrapped in the bandages, and yes, that part included his wife. But his shoes were relatively unique, and it's not hard to believe that only his wife would recognize his shoes.
almost too cute.
The ace bandages never slipped?
No one recognized his voice?
And
in the dark, on the far side of the back yard, at a distance
she recognized his shoes? Even though he had them on in the well lit house?
It's called being an asshole. I like to study people's reactions. It's fun to piss people off from time to time, and then wait for the inevitable and predictable heat. Try it! Even if you don't mean a word you write, it's fun to see the various reactions. You can gauge a lot about people, when you fire them up! Also, I like a good laugh!
And I tend to over think every scenario, actually, I tend to over think EVERYTHING when my insomnia kicks in. (Maybe the two are liked, somehow)
But mostly it's that I like to get reactions from people.
I just like to disagree with people, even when I think they might be right! Everyone tends to give their opinion as if it's FACT, with no room for a dissenting view, with no room for even the possibility of being wrong! I'm all for being free to have a voice, but there is usually two sides to every argument. Even if one side of that argument is completely wrong, it should be aired, if for no other reason than to encourage us to learn to see things from another point of view.
But if I'm being honest, I just need to vent, from time to time! No other motive than that! Like I said, I'm an asshole, and proud!
I also wondered how, after refusing sex with another man, she would suddenly screw another man, it seemed contrary to her nature.
And while WE obviously didn't know about the shoes, I thought that having gone as far as to give him a blow job she would have recognized her husband's cock!
Thanks for the wicked curve ball you threw for an ending. I've known his pain and feared the aftermath of his. You handled it beautifully.
Kudos are well deserved.
I was thinking "What a disappointment." She seemed so willing to have sex with a possible friend or co-worker in disguise. She never told her husband that she knew it was him. What would she have done if he had picked up his handgun from his house while she slept on the sofa; then he had gone and checked into a motel, and blew his brains out. Good save. You went from a 1-star to a 5-star. But, in real life, I would have killed the man with whom she had 'cheated'...ME!
You really enjoy writing stories with a twist at the end.
I liked it a lot. Good plot, not over done. Realistic.
Looked like it was heading into a more dramatic, cuckold angst direction. I for one am glad you kept it light and fun.
Well deserved 5* from me.
She went to that party dressed to attract men to her sexiness, with the hope of possibly getting a good fucking, if the situation worked out. She fucking well knew what he was up to when she went out on that deck but the the asshole fucked it up for himself by getting pushy... then crude, nasty and overbearing, instead of noticing that she'd had too much to drink, offering to drive her home, where she knew there would be no witnesses and she could let the known pussy hound romance her until he was balls deep in her pussy... giving her possibly the first in a series of long 'night caps' that only she and he will ever know of.
(Personally, I'm convinced that women are whores at heart. It's in their genes. My genes gave me high sex appeal to women and, over time, I gained a reputation for being a well hung, highly skilled and thorough sex partner who never revealed a woman's secrets.
I've never been married but I've been a clandestine sex partner to well over a thousand wives... at least a couple of hundred beautiful, prim and proper wives that no one who knew them would EVER have suspected of having an affair. I NEVER wore condoms, never pulled out during climax and never cheated on the women that I was cheating with. (another feature attraction of my reputation) When I was 'seeing' a woman, she would know that she was the only one that I had relations with... except for three of them who shared me with seven of their sisters... five married, two young, single and eager.
You really have a knack for creating a surprise ending. Well done. I love your loving wife stories. Great job. Thanks. Keep writing !
While my numbers do not match your claim, I agree with your belief about all females being whores or whatever you clled them. In my life I have never worn a condom and with one notable exception never revealed an identity.
I have also never chased or tried to seduce a wife. While I converse with them if they come up to me I never flirt or make suggestive remarks. I do not fuck wives or girlfriends of my friends..nor do I screw them if they are exes. That has limited my numbers as I have been repeatedly approached by females in those categories.
My rule with wifes is they have to flat out ask me to have sex with them. I always tell them to think about it and get back to me but only after they view it from the standpoint that word would get out, though not by me. To only get back to me after they knew they would for a fact be getting divorced and everyone would know why. Some reconsidered and even thanked me for not taking advantage. A number came back and ended up screwing me for extended period of time.
All females talk. They cannot help it. When a good looking intelligent male has a thick cock, knows how to use it, an educated tongue that makes sure she has had more than one orgasm before he has taken his clothes off or received any attention from them except long lingering kisses well then word gets around.
I do not chase or seduce because their friends have already seduced them for me.
The one exception to my being discrete came about because she liked to brag about her conquests...she was a serial cheater introduced to me one night as this oh so refined and respectable college instructor and Candy Shop owner and damned if she didn't look and act like it. Fooled me.
I felt the telegraph wires signaling the ending somewhere on the ride home...
Thanks for making it so!
5 stars, of course!
Good story and a pleasant surprise (believable) ending. My wife is always after me to get rid of some go my "ugly shoes".
and beguiling leaves unturned stones, TK U MLJ LV NV
I hope Libby learned that drinking when husband isn't around is a bad idea. If hadn't been rescued she would have been raped and possibly lost her family and friends. Because Libby had spent a good deal of time dancing with George with a very revealing outfit it would be hard to prove rape. Sometimes close misses are wake up calls.
they all follow along the same lines. I really enjoyed the fight though and the entire story was well done. Rarely do I give HDK less than 5. This is no exception.
I can picture the two of them in front of the Judge! She cheated on me with another man! Says Judge to Wifee is that true? Yes your Honor! Who may I ask says hubby? You you Fucken Idiot! Yeah right! NOT!
I like the story it's so silly it's Great! Thanks for sharing this Fantastic Story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!
The thing that should have been addressed was her outfit and the drinking. Libby showing uo with nipples about uncovered was a bad idea when drinking. She fortunate that she wasn't raped. I liked the story and husband being the victor.
I'm a little surprised how many readers
liked this story.
Because I didn't.
Usually it's the other way around, when I rate stories.
Because I'm in minority opinion wise,
I think it's right to air my dislikes, even though others have mentioned them.
Wife goes alone to a party dressing slutty.
Wife drinks to much at said party.
Wife gives husband a blowjob,
knowing he doesn't know she recognizes him.
Wife sends him off without explaining,
to spend a night in doubt and probably hurt.
Now, tell me where in this you see a loving wife?
I'm sure the writer included all the details about
the wife, to add up to a surprise ending.
But in doing that, he described a wife I wouldn't want to be married to.
Was that worth the surprise?
Not to me.
3 out of 5 from me.
Nothing about Libby screamed that she was a cheater before that whole incident, so it was a given she knew it was her man who saved her, not some anonymous hero.
Sure, you have to question why she needs to dress up like a slut during Halloween, something only single women in the 20's should do, not middle-aged broads who knew their husbands would have issues with them showing so much skin. Lots of people mentioned the lack of respect Libby displayed here, and, on some level, I have to agree with that - as I said, her going to any party alone, dressed as she was, is quite problematic. I have less reason to complaint about her playing her man up by not revealing that she knew it was him all alone, 'cause those are the mind games women love to play with the men they love - denying it won't make it any less true. Hopefully, almost getting rape by George will make her think twice before once again wearing inappropriate costumes where drinks are served freely, especially if her husband ain't around.
There's nothing here to really applaud or to get upset about - just a tale of a silly wife marrying to a dependent husband, which she is quite aware of. Not really memorable, but, thankfully, not at all deplorable. ★★★★
What is it about? Husband stops assault on a faithful wife?
The achieve any motivation you needed to dress up wife into slutty outfit and made her drink too much? And you decided to write this?
This stuff is not even worth reading time much less writing about that.
As others have said, wife dressing slutty and drinking caused me to be unsympathetic to her character. (By the way, full moon always rises near sundown, not at midnight.)
Betrayed by footwear. Happens more than you know. Thank you for this cautionary tale.
After confession, wife spanks hubby for not trusting her at party and trying to fool her.
Epilogue: Hubby returns the favor! Much sex ensues!
Playing with fire, though. If the husband had gone straight to accusation instead of the roundabout questioning, it'd have been very tough to prove she actually knew it was him beforehand. But then, there'd be no tension to the story, I guess.
An HDK that I have not read previously, and another good one. Had there for a minute, then I remembered who was writing.
This one we really very much liked and throughly enjoyed, including the loving and touching forever and ever loved ones.
We thank you and your creative writing.
SW
Normally I hate RAAC stories, but when the author writes so well, you are on the wife's side, and it turns out good, its a pleasant read... Thanks...
Fun story, George got a well deserved ass kicking. Great ending Libby knowing all the time it was here his husband. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
No guy could ever, truly, keep secrets from a truly living wife. And it's just not worth trying!! Thank you.