All Comments on 'Heritage Ch. 04'

enjoying how youre taking this with the development and story lines...i know this is suppose to bdsm so im looking forward to seeing who/what/where and why heh...keep up the great work please and thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

It's hard to say yet. The plot is very good and I like your style. Of course it loks like it is a very long plot and I would like to se it trough the end. Not taking into account that this story is in the BDSM section, I give it the top rating for presentation, style and the intrigue. Keep going on it. If the rest is as good I predict you a lot of succes with it and following stories and a lot of incoming mail as well. Regards.

Having read 4 chapter so far I'm still confused

Your vocabulary is great, the phrasing is good & there are very few typos.

I am unsure as to how many chapters there will be, however, I hope the pace increases, even slightly, from the pedestrian.

I know you warned of the slow style but it's positively snail-like. I am curious enough to stick with it for the moment despite the smug, self indulgent smirks & knowing glances.

Regards

still slow

And I see there is no more . Looks to be 17 years old and still not finished ???????????????