All Comments on 'Hers For Life Ch. 01'

Slow slow consistent build up of details to establish dominance and submissiveness. Both seem perfectly fitted as raw material for this very outside the norm way. The pace is agonizingly seductive and entirely believable, and seems entirely natural and stronger in the girl. Let it happen! More chapters!

Well written. You show in stunning detail the slow development of this relationship. However, I dislike that once again 'submission' seems to be equated with destroying that person you supposedly love so much, and domination is simply selfish petty manipulation. It's standing on the trestle listening to the train whistle drawing closer and being unable to move.

I do hope hope those who enjoy it all comment for you.

Only real idiots would claim that a partnership is formed here. An immature college boy and an immature slut are looking for their likes. One thing is for sure, they have nothing in common to base a partnership on. Except, of course, for the author's perverse fantasy!

Well done. F2M slow erotic manipulation is a hot category that very few people do well. Just finishing Pt2 which I like even more than Pt1. Thanks.! MML