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How I yearn for such a big thick hot cock to suck on, to feel the warm juices exploding from his thick cock into my mouth and ass fill's me with so much orgasmic pleasure that I am licking my own cum from my hand as I type this comment YUM YUM YUM

Honestly can't believe someone would think this was poorly written. Totally hot with vivid descriptions. A sequel with fucking would be great.

Appreciate the comments, all taken under advisement. Maybe the next one will be better received.

This in all seriousness, is the hottest story I've read on this site. God, the details, imagery is all so hot :)). I can't wait for the next one, maybe include sex next time?! :)

Made me so hard wow

Your use of some very poor and same old adjectives to describe a COCK ruined this story. Don’t quit your day job. 2*s for your effort.

Loved the story, very familiar with the location and Tally