All Comments on 'Hey Neighbor Ch. 01'

by dark_paradise

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
huh?

A bit disorganized with being completely inside and then suddenly talking about hymen breaking.....this story has a great theme, but is really rushed. Slow it down a bit and draw it out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
hey neighbor

Whitest smile?

White guys smile?

Widest smile?

Whitey smiles?

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