All Comments on 'Hi, Mind If I Sit?'

by PRNY

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The_DarknessThe_Darknessabout 20 years ago
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Gave you a 4...it was a really good story and more or less properly done, but a few more details would be good....it's pretty easy to get lost in there, and it's almost like there's a paragraph missing from the end....

seadaddyseadaddyabout 20 years ago
It did the Job!

Short, sweet and pretty much to the point. I love exhibitionist stories and this one did it for me. Just about realistic enough to be believable and all the more enjoyable for that. Hope there is a part 2 in the making.

PaoloPaoloabout 20 years ago
Did the job for me

realistic or not it WAS pretty hot.

Nice job PRNY!

Paolo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Nice coffee house

Great quickie

MR. GibsonMR. Gibsonabout 20 years ago
good story

nice story. very sexy and quick. all I need to know is can you give me directions to this coffee house? Were the coffee isn't the only thing served up hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
You Wish . . . .Dream on ! ! ! !

You wish ... what most guys'd die for . . . it was a good, hot read that most can identify with . . . . . . .

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