by PRNY
Gave you a 4...it was a really good story and more or less properly done, but a few more details would be good....it's pretty easy to get lost in there, and it's almost like there's a paragraph missing from the end....
Short, sweet and pretty much to the point. I love exhibitionist stories and this one did it for me. Just about realistic enough to be believable and all the more enjoyable for that. Hope there is a part 2 in the making.
nice story. very sexy and quick. all I need to know is can you give me directions to this coffee house? Were the coffee isn't the only thing served up hot!!!
You wish ... what most guys'd die for . . . it was a good, hot read that most can identify with . . . . . . .