All Comments on 'Hi, My Name Is Hollie! Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
beautiful!

too bad this is fiction- I would have loved to watch them self-suck, eating their own cum!

glad you have more to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice

Good first start. Yeah, more around the scene, but this is promising.

YKN4949YKN4949over 11 years ago
I like it

I like this genre mashing story. Could have used a little more of a seduction sequence (why are these two having sex is an underrated way to determine how sexy a story is). but that's just a minor quibble. I have it a 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
HOOOTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is a very hot story so far keep the chapters cummin

griffin57griffin57over 11 years ago
Hmmmmm

I was disturbed by how much I found this strangely facinating.

FallenAlfarFallenAlfarover 11 years ago

I wonder if you'll make the sisters impregnate themselves or each other.

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