All Comments on 'Hidden Desires'

Very sexy. My panties are damp.

I'd like to read more of their adventures. Well done. Five stars from me.

I look forward to further adventures

not a bad story, nothing like beating around the bush when you want someone and you never know how they feel

I loved it! I agree with jenorma completely. The dialogue seemed a bit stilted but did nothing to detract from the story. Looking forward to more of these 2. As I know your British Jolly Good. (4 yrs posted to the UK. USAF) 5 stars

I really liked the innocence and the tease building up to the inevitable conclusion. I hope we will be hearing more about Penny & Sue?

Thanks for the comments everyone, it does help encourage writing more and hopefully better stories when your work is appreciated and critiqued.

I have heard and read many similar stories like this. But this one is something beautifully written. Would love to read again. A very good effort and look forward for more such stories.

This was truly a loving story of two young friends that found each other's true sexuality. This was a wonderful time in their lives and really discovered love.

This was sort of slow getting started but it gained traction quickly.

My pussy was literally seeping with pussy juice as they licked their way to climaxes.

You should be proud of yourself for the way that you wrote it. I loved the way that you took your time getting them together and having incredible sex.

Especially liked the idea of them sleeping in the same bed not wearing anything and cuddling as they went to sleep although I really don't think that they slept a lot that first night

Great story

Unrealistic, in that these two would have not been able to wait so long to share their desires. Bodies together in the same bed during that year of travel; this would have been when their feet, ankles and calves touched, leading to embracing, hands in their partner's hair and a sweet merger of lips and tongues. And surely, whenever that evening had happened, these two would have been 69ing, tribbing, suckling and rubbing each other's breasts through the sunrise!